First, we can relieve stress. I get a lot of stress from tests and studying. You probably do as well because of too much work. I think we'll be able to relieve all this stress by going on a family vacation because we'll forget all about stress while seeing interesting and beautiful scenes.
Secondly, it will bring our family closer. Even though our family is very close and has a good attitude towards each other, by a family vacation, we'll be able to become even closer and have better relations. As a fact, a statistic shows that 53% of youth surveyed agreed that a family vacation helps bring families closer.
Lastly, it will make good memories, We will be able to make lifelong memories to keep for ourselves. As a fact, a statistic shows that 76% of parents surveyed agreed that families' vacations make family members keep great memories.
For these reasons, I believe that we should go on a family vacation.
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I think you will go to the vacation!!
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Hoping you'll be able to go to a vacation!
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